Author's Note 2/9/09

I feel that I have a lot to cover in my paper, and after the first four pages I feel a little nervous. I am not sure that I am really arguing what I want to about the Rec Center, and I think my paper needs a little more direction. I hope to get some feedback today about what I can do to make my paper have a little bit more focus or direction. I have lots to say, I just want to make it all go together cohesively and with purpose.